Juniper

Hey there Joshua :), I generally don't do nitpicks, but there are a few places I'd like to 'pick' at here. Overall, I think the story is impressive. As I ...

Irishfire! Hello! You have a cool username, haha. I'm June, your reviewer for the moment. Skillet, huh? Not every day I find a fan of them! (I'm a closet fan, ...

Hello Auteur :). I'm June, and I'll be your reviewer for the moment. I think that this story has a ground for potential. I have followed this since you posted ...

Aloha, Kammie! Can't quite grasp this one. It's a decent poem, I think, but it seems more like a start to me. I think you should work on revising this. ...

Impressive, Galeri! I agree with Daisy; it was very intense, as well as very well-versed with a steady pull. Your beginning was addictive, and you carried the quality through to ...

Greetings, Henry, and a warm welcome to YWS! Nice! I love your direction; action, mystery, all of that great stuff here. I'm definitely going to follow this one along as ...

Wow, Eddie! This is good; I can honestly say that you've come a long way. Your poetry is steadily improving (and even if you don't think so, I promise, it ...

Kylan, [Before I proceed to drone on about the awesomosity of this, let me warn you and say that I am overly rusty at reviewing and don't think I'll say ...

G'day Rosey, I'm a bit overly rusty at reviewing, so if I'm unclear in anything, feel free to send me a PM or post in my guestbook, and I'll do ...

Hi, Ambrosia It's an okay start. I'd love to see you build onto this, make it fuller, more substantial. For now, it's kind of empty, kind of like a soliloquy. ...

Hey Jaderemoi! June here! In all honesty, I didn't find this prologue interesting. I didn't think it had any bit of a "hook" to it, and in a strange way, ...

Hey Creative! Decent start. As some of the other reviewers mentioned, I think this could use a good deal of building on. Right now, you're giving us a few pieces ...

Hello, sheep! I think this poem has some potential, but could use a bit of work. To start, the organization stood out to me; the thoughts in this seemed scattered, ...

Heylo, Tiff! June here! Two excuses: I haven't reviewed much standardized prose lately, I've dealt more in informative articles, minimalist, and experimental type writing lately, that I think I may ...

Kylankylankylan!!! Breathtakingly well done! I can't say that this is awesome in the same way that apostasy and hospice are, but, this is definitely beyond fantastic. Not to say that ...