Juniper

Hi RJ! June here! Okay, to start, I have to say this is a wonderful poem. I really enjoy the theme of it, and it had a suspenseful touch to ...

Hi Selin! I'm June! So, I think poems about emotions are a wonderful way to express yourself and get the words out in a way other than talking. However, I ...

Hi Gwendolen! June here! I think this poem definitely has a lot of potential, but it seems like it's in a 'rough draft' stage. In the first stanza, you have ...

Leeeather! June here! Have I reviewed you before? :P It doesn't seem like I have... Lethero wiped the blood off on the white shirt of the dead man laying on ...

Hey Con! You get my 700th review! 700 is a big number. I remember when I was doing my 350th review in March...I feel pretty bad dragging up an old ...

Hey Kat! Sadly I have no constructive criticism to offer here. :P I really enjoyed this poem, Kat. In the third stanza, the rhyming of immortal portal kind of sounds... ...

Aloha Hawkie! Have I reviewed you before? I don't think I have, I think I've just bothered your eyes with useless rambles in chat, no? Well! Here I go. I'm ...

Aaangel! June here! (Why do you use Tildes [~] so? :P) So, right, the poem: the morning is gravid with dew drops. sweet from the petals of the flowers that ...

Well hey there, Darko! You haven't been around for a while (what's that about??) :P. Anyway, June here to [s]shred[/s] review your poem. =P On a side note, please remember ...

Hi Walshie! June here! So, I think this poem has some potential to it, but the way that it's currently written is not doing much for the audience, nor is ...

Hi Rosey! June here! I agree. This is a nice piece of work you have here. =D Whispered behind closed doors, silenced as soon as the conversation comes into the ...

Hey Silented! I'm June, your critic for the moment. :) While I think you can go places with the idea of this poem, I have to say that the way ...

@_@ Long poem! Hey Jon! June here! Haha, I love shredding your stuff... On a serious note, this poem isn't my favorite. :P Coming to see me again, are you? ...

Hi there, Ballet Dancer! I'm June, your critic for the moment. To be honest, this poem was not the most interesting read. It lacked structure; rather it was a long, ...

Hi Blink! June here! Have I ever reviewed you before? It seems like I haven't. So, reading over this poem, I can tell it needs improvement; yet, it was very ...