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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Salted Rain

    Hi Happy-dear! June here! I haven't reviewed anything by you in ages! Anywhoo, here we go: • Okay! In your first stanza, the only thing that needs changing/fixing is your ...

    Feb 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: A Hundred Suns: Etherite

    Hey Stori/FOD! June here! Okay! I really, really like A Hundred Suns: Sepia, so, I figured I would probably enjoy the other parts. I enjoyed most of them, but this? ...

    Feb 16, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: .....Forget me not

    Hey there Sincerely, June here, and I am going to review this for you! I'll try not to be too harsh on you dear, here we go :D. I can't ...

    Feb 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Wolves (Love in the Sky)

    Hey there Zalarus! June here! There's not much to say about this piece other than how good it was. I really enjoyed it from start to finish. Compared to the ...

    Feb 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pathless

    Hey there Meow! Welcome to YWS *late*! I'm June and I am going to review this for you. Before I begin, I want to mention that it's better to post ...

    Feb 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Where is my radiant sun?

    Hi there Velvet Night! Nice to meet you-- welcome to YWS! I'm June, your critic for the moment, and I am going to run over this for you :D. Also! ...

    Feb 14, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You vs. Me

    Hey there Quiet Loud! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you (By the way, cool oxymoron of a username you have there :P) Let's get to business ...

    Feb 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My day

    Hi there drama queen! I'm June! [I'm pretty sure we've met before, right? :)] Eek! I understand you're semi-new-ish, but our 2:1 policy must not be forgotten, dear. :) Please ...

    Feb 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted poem

    Hey there Zakku Alpha! I'm June and I am going to review this for you :). (And, by the way, welcome to YWS! Hooray for new members!) So! Your concept ...

    Feb 12, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Violence

    Hey Brina! I'm June :) This is a good foundation for an essay. It's serious and straight to the point. There are a few things in this that need some ...

    Feb 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Quenched

    Hi there Hannah! It's June! [Gosh I haven't reviewed you in so long!] I think this is great. Not just plain great, but like, supertastically great. It's slightly... morbid :? ...

    Feb 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Busy Is Your Low

    Hey there mystymizer! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you :). This was clearly expressed; I love how you voiced how you feel about the town. Well ...

    Feb 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Moksha, Pt. 1

    Hey there Zalarus! I'm not sure if I've reviewed you before; but I'm June. I found this piece, and I wasn't expecting much from it as I opened it. But! ...

    Feb 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Not Enough

    Hi there Yatta! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you ;). Okay! So! This was decent. I think that this holds a definite potential to be able ...

    Feb 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Lesson from the Storm

    Hey there! I'm June and I'm going to review this for you :). Lightening thunders across the sky. I feel the rain and sigh. A cool breeze hits my face ...

    Feb 9, 2009


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