JustJasper

Hey Ossie here! Great job on your work by the way. I loved the imagery of the sky being painted like a canvas. One thing you need to fix is ...

Wow! This is a really cool work! I like how you smoothly explained where the robbers originated from. However I did notice that you didn't show the reader what you ...

I really enjoyed the structure of your writing especially how you worked in te comments from the future. Your writing flows nicely and is easy to read and understand. I ...

I really enjoye your story and I think you wrote it really really well! There is not much that I would suggest fixing, I liked your drescriptions of things and ...

This is a really interesting work. I like how you began with an action to pull readers into your story, I could only notice a few things that need to ...

This is an awesome story! I wasn't expecting it to have a happy ending so I am really glad that it did. One thing you could fix is the tense ...

Hey! I enjoyed chatting with you so I thought I'd review your story. I really like the concept and how it opens with the con-artist being interrogated! One thing that ...

Hi! The first thing I would like to say is that I absolutely love the way you wrote this! Your message made me really happy and hopeful for the future. ...

Wow this is really interesting! I like how you used a series of shorter sentences to make it seem more fast paced and sudden. You could touch up the grammar ...

I really like the premise for your book! Your ideas are well formed and the work is funny and entertaining. You could double check the grammar and maybe get a ...

I really like what you said and how you said it! I am also frustrated when people look at me and make the assumption that because I am a girl ...