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I agree with the above posters... More quotes would really add to this... I really liked the first quote and the tone of the piece as a whole... I also ...

I've just come back to this poem and have quickly looked over it and added a few bit and changed some other points. Any more suggestions? Are my new stanzas ...

I know that I am also really late on replying to this, but it really did have me gripped. You told it excellently with just the right amount of description. ...

I liked this. Not sure I can really critique the writing but I can tell you one thing.. You've certainly got me all excited about going to see him play ...

I agree with SimplyPersnikety; the titles endeared me to think this would be something really good - filled with description, yet I was disappointed by the length of it and ...

In a world ruled by the media, it’s no surprise that the journalism market is expanding. So, as a 16 year old aspiring journalist, I took a look around the ...

I really enjoyed this. My exams start on tuesday so it was an interesting piece. I like the rhyming structure as well. Not too sure about the lines.. "Right now, ...

Magnificent mansions, fast cars, exotic holidays and loneliness – doesn’t this paint a clichéd image to you? For many people winning the lottery is a dream. A life without financial ...

This was just supposed to be about general fear. But seemed to evolve so that it reads like it's about abuse or something.. Not too sure.. You creep up on ...

I love how you have written this. Especially with the fact that you've used rhyme. Very good.

I really liked this. As others have said; I'm not sure of the tenses, but it's a really lovely short poem. Hope to see more work like this. :)

Have added punctuation, plus editted a few more bits. I'm really unsure on the first stanza; but don't know how it can be bettered?

I really like this. Although perhaps the stanza with the least imagery; the second stanza is my favourite. It's very truthful and I like that.

The gritted teeth The awkward glares The angry threats The countless nightmares The fake laughs The playing along The watching in The staying strong The silent whispers The invisible tear ...

I'm afraid I have to agree with everyone about the cliches. Something with more originality would have been better. I think I have the same issue with the "poor me" ...