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Have made lots of edits to the poem. What do you now think?

The secret is depression. I'm going to rework it later and post it again.. Thanks for the feedback though, it's really useful..

I really liked this. The use of the first person is really good, allowing the thoughts and emotions to come across well. Please post more..

I like the informal tone of it. It almost sounds like an advertisement speech at the top. Enjoyed reading it as it involves the reader.. Perhaps not the best poetry ...

I really enjoyed reading this. Have little else to say as it is very good. Well Done :)

Ooh, thanks for th gift :) There seem to be so many emoticons :!: Cat x

I wrote this in year 9 (age 13) and just re-discovered it lurking at the back of my documents. I remember getting into heated discussions with my English teacher about ...

Once again, I feel that this is on the border between sweet and cliched. Although I think it's a nice gesture either way. The mentionned spelling/grammar points need to be ...

I think that crime thrives off of the developments in technology; all sorts of fraudulent activity now can be done with just the click of a button. And I agree ...

Overall I like this poem. It has a nice flow to it, although there's a couple of things I am unsure about... You start with rhyme in the first two ...

Not just a secret, this was denial. Blocked out for so long. Denying its existence. I lied for months To everyone, but most of all Myself. I just wouldn’t accept ...

I really enjoyed reading this. The emotion is shown so clearly which allows the reader a good understanding of everything that's going on. Well done.

Thanks :)

There's a debate club? Where? I'd love to be in a debate club lol..

Hi :) Yeah, you can call me Cat. I think I'm just about finding my feet here... Cat x