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Hi, I'm new to this site. I had posted on a few other creative sites last year, but haven't been to creative of late. However, this is something I'm working ...

I haven't seen an acrostic poem in ages.. :) This is really good. It creates a really lovely, positive description of something that is quite often hard to explain. Like ...

I really like this. I agree with everyone else :)

I really like the imagery in this. It's simple but sharp. Nothing else to add, the strict format leaves it hard to add anything else!

I really like this. Good use of a range of adjectives and verbs. Not any real rhythm but if that's not necessary to the poem then that's fine. Can't really ...

I like the chorus "That is why I stand in the rain So no one can see me crying." It's nice imagery. There are a few things I'm not so ...

Thanks. I've made the suggested edits. I now realise how the punctuation is needed, have I got it right?

I really like the poem overall; and feel that most points that I would've made have already been said. Although I really don't think I like the repetition of Quote: ...

Sorry about not reviewing others work first; I'm making a start on that now.. I've edited it to try and rework the rhythm/rhyme, but now there are some lines that ...

I really like this. Especially your choice of verbs; they are really effective in my opinion. Felt the burning, scraping, clawing at my lungs... The assonance works well with those. ...

Any constructive criticism is welcomed.. Media hype and zero anonymity Is what makes a celebrity. Talent is a plus, But not a must. So much for originality. Journalists fight then ...

Am new to this site so just thought I'd show my face with a poem of mine. Any constructive criticism is appreciated :) Silently sitting; contemplating, These thoughts won't flee ...