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JustMeValery

JustMeValery

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Silenced (Prologue)

    Hello there! I'm just here to give you a review, so I'm sorry if I'm too bitchy or something. Hope it helps, though ;) Okay, let's start! "The snow fell ...

    Sep 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Strawberry Hearts -3-

    Hello there! Wow! What writing! I really like the way how personal you're making this. It's very - how should I put this? - emotional. Keep writing, I think it's ...

    Sep 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 27

    Hello there! I'm just giving you a review, hope I'm not being to bitchy or something ;) Now, the story's good. It's not going too fast or too slow, so ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Covenant (Prologue)

    Hello there! I really like your writing! The dialogues are easy to follow and interesting. But I felt like doing a review about it, so here you go. Hope I'm ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Miss Green's Home for special children

    Hello there! An interesting story you've got here. I'm just going to say my opinion here, hope it can help you :). First, I really like the intro (the prophecy). ...

    Aug 31, 2014


Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind