Justlittleoleme

Everyone else has already pointed out the few grammatical issues and so on so I guess I'm free to simply say I loved it. I found this poem to be ...

I loved this poem! The imagery was as powerful as one could hope and the story of the shackled kind was moving. I could almost see the cage of bones, ...

Thanks so much for your review! I realize the awkward sentence structure is just the tip of the ice burg with the problems this story has. I'm very embarrassed for ...

THanks for the advise XD . After I posted this I actually kept going back and trying to fix the many errors but they just seem to keep appearing. I ...

I actually liked this piece a lot. Everyone else seems to have pointed out the errors and rough spots so I don't have anything to say there. Overall it was ...

This is the re-written version of the original I first posted. It is very different from the first one though it will eventually build back to the original fight scene...just ...

I enjoyed the beginning of the story. I was able to connect with it and I got a pretty good idea of where your character was from. I do feel ...

Thank you :D Like I said in the post before, I don't tend to focus in any one type or genre. If I had to choose one I guess I ...

I really enjoyed reading this! It was original to say the least and made some very good feels a little clumsy when reading it though. I would say it needs ...

XD Thanks for the welcome! :D At first I was a little lost but I think I'm starting to figure this place out XD I don't really have a set ...

Hey, I'm new here(obviously XD) and I thought I would go ahead and introduce myself. I'm just little ole me for the most part. I'm not some super talented writer ...