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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

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Thanks for your review. :) I haven't thought of my writing that way before - I'll try to use what you mentioned more in future writing.

I really liked the way you used a child's POV, and the last two lines really brought the entire poem together and summed up the main idea beautifully. You have ...