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As I said before, I'm sorry if I sounded rude at all. Thank you for explaining your comment's meaning, it clears things up much more for me. Though you have ...

I don't know yet, I'll sleep on it. I'm tired. Haha! Thank you so much for your help and your patience with me.

One more quick question, sorry if I'm bugging you... Should I add a fourth line to stanza 5? I originally put "But they don't know how much it burns", but ...

I really like your suggestions for stanza 5. Thank you so much!

I'm kinda new to other writers reviewing my poems, so when they say I could edit it more, I'm clueless on how to go about that and bring out it's ...

Thank you!

Thanks you :) I've been looking at some of your other work, and long story short, to have you review one of my pieces of work makes me super happy ...

#ElizabethLovelace -I just wanted to correct you on that whole "happy ending" thing, sorry if I sound at all rude... Just because someone is abused doesn't mean we can't have ...

There we go

No problem :)

I really love this poem! I've learned form personal experience that you truly have to feel the emotions swarm your heart in order to write a poem passionately. Well, there ...

How is it now?

Thank you so much! So split it up into more paragraphs is what you're saying?

Thanks!

So I went with the flow you were going with on the joy part, how is it now?