Kaaktarua

We used to have the time of our lives. You and me, going crazy over the swings. We used to nick your Daadi’s* pickles and eat them under the gargantuan ...

This poem is very good! I love the way you can express yourself so very vividly. Your ending style is amazing. It's like in the end, it hits you right ...

The sentence, "Aren't you scared I'll leave?" is very bold. And that's what I like about this poem. It has a boldness about it. I think what you mean by ...

Something similar did happen to me too. And that's why I like this poem so much. It has depth in it, and I like the way you can make me ...

Now, I like this story. But while reading it, at certain times, it seemed to me like the words were overused..and they were sort of similar. I like the way ...