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Ouuhh! Good idea! I honestly hadn't noticed the lack of imagery to the ocean in the second stanza. I just let my thoughts do the talking, but now that you ...

Aww thank you! ~

Thank you for the review! I never thought of adding specifics to it, but you%u2019re right it would be a great way to expand. I%u2019m glad you enjoyed it! Stay ...

Thank you! Yes I wasn%u2019t aiming for any structure when I was writing, just venting my thoughts in a way. I suppose I could elaborate more in different places. I ...

just came here to say it reminds me of a song by Amber Run called 5am. A little different meaning but still relatable~

Dude I forgot to submit it as a review not a comment. Sorry my bad %uD83E%uDD26%u200D%u2640%uFE0F

Chickens are now officially scary ~~

Thank you! Sorry for my really late response, I haven't logged in for a week or so..... I will definitely change those things to clarify a bit more!

Just wanted to say that this is so relatable 😭

Hey! Again I appreciate your concern and comment. I wonld understand if I was writing this story purely to discriminate that someone would feel offended. However, I am simply developing ...

PS: I know, I am trying to not info dump everything onto you guys. I will create a prologue when I come back to actually getting the chapters written, but ...

That%u2019s probably a good idea, I never thought of running it through grammarly. Thank you!

That%u2019s probably a good idea, I never thought of running it through grammarly. Thank you!

Haha thank you for reviewing the second part! I%u2019ll definitely revise my sentences later I am just trying to get a rough draft down of what the plot will be ...

Thanks for the suggestions! Someone already mentioned adding a prologue so I think I will break it down quite a bit with that. For #3 I plan on writing it ...