Kaedee

Hey hoagie, Kae here. I sighed, my limbs giving in to the ridiculously strong duct tape. It’s no use. He wasn’t going to do anything to me anyway. If he ...

Hi Daisuki! These are all pretty good. I think I like the first one and the third one the best, though. I love the girl's cute expression and pose in ...

Hi Rory, welcome to YWS! Left 4 Dead? Ohhh, I know that game. :o I'm looking forward to reading your work! If you have any questions, you can leave a ...

Hey Kayla. I'm Kae. Welcome to the site! :3 YWS is pretty addicting. I always end up coming back. The users are all friendly, and so are the moderators. Don't ...

Heey Shadow! I'm Kae. Welcome to YWS! I have a question...are you a dancer? :D Haha, your username just made me wonder, 'cause I'm one. Also, what's your favorite genre ...

Hi Ignorance! Blood-red numbers flashed out at him, drawing his attention like a boat to a lifehouse. Nice. The part in bold is clever, and it helps transition from the ...

So cute. x) I wonder what he's dreaming about...

Hiya! Kaedee here. ^^ "Hey, Julie, my mom said get up," the young girl said . Generally people use the word 'the' when the object or person has been introduced ...

Hi there! I feel like you stuffed too many character descriptions in here. I had a hard time remembering who was who, and it got a little bit confusing. For ...

I like eBooks, but I still like hard copy books better. I love turning real pages. :F

The blurb. The genre. And yes, I suppose little things like the title and the cover may effect my book-choosing too...-.0

Hey, welcome everyone who hasn't been welcomed yet! :D I hope you guys all like the site so far. If you have any questions, just PM a mod (the users ...

Short stories. I actually get them finished...

Sand

Thanks for the critiques, guys. ^^