Kagi

Amazing. It was so real. Scared me to death. I loved it, the whole soul learning to save and kill at the same time. *Tears up* Must publish this. Well ...

Couldn't have put it better myself! Excellent. *Claps, hands award, pins badge on shirt* Had nothing that I didn't agree with. Good good good! Talented writer award. Love kaka x

No problem, I geuss I didnt't think about the schooling thing. When you already have a plot in mind I keeping thinking everyone should already know it! ;) You have ...

Hmph... Thank you. I will try and do those little bits of editing. As I said I was in a bit of a pothole so when inspiration came I was ...

Again thank you so much; I hope he's a spy or something. I hadn't really thought about that one. Haha :) I think you'll find its a bit of a ...

Okay cool. I'll work on that. Thank you skinsy. *Bows* Thanks everyone foryour reveiws they mean so much to me. Love and merry christmas Kaka x

Thanks luxy! ;) You wrote; I don't know why, but the janitor 'passionately' scrubbing at the locker makes me laugh. That was great! I know I colored it in, but ...

Looking good shubi! This is a really good peice. Your imagery was fantastic too. I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter. You should be proud. Kaka x

Write more write more more more more.. *leaps onto stool and starts a chant; We want more We want more! (x5000)* This is soo good, when will there be more. ...

Nothing at al it was just such a surprise to Alicia as she has grown up with Luke and his so called family, she never guessed he never belonged. So ...

Lovely story.you seem greatly talented. Do up intend on writing more? Pm me Kakagirl xx Merry chirstmas

Tanka everyone!!!! I know I'm really slow about getting in the plot :( still trying to work out what happens with Luke, like why he left? Anyhow will write more ...

Thanks everyone!? Your reveiws helped Kaka x

Hey it's kaka here... Gr8 story well written and thoroughly enjoyed. I love your choice of words and your plot was excellent. Great piece well done Kaka x

Wow this poem really flowed quite well. It had momentum. I really enjoyed reading it, it had rythme and your word choic was excellent. I had no nit picks it ...