Kaia

I am quite enjoying it, hence my coming back repeatedly :D

Absolutely! :D

You're welcome! That part did become clearer a little further on, but maybe quickly mentioning why that is a fact would help clear that up a bit. :D

*the people I review for* sorry I'm tired xP

I'm so glad!! I worry sometimes I annoy my reviewers when it comes to grammer.

Awesome :D Glad to review for someone who enjoys my review!

Oh yes I definitely enjoyed reading it, and I'm so glad my review style is helpful!!

Good point on the foreshadowing. I did try with that but it could probably use some more. I'm terrible at writing things that occur suddenly. Thanks for dropping this review!!

Thanks for the useful suggestions!! Much appreciated!! Will work on implementing them into my next draft.

Oh, thanks, @alliyah!!

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Excellent! You're welcome :D

You're so welcome. And wishing you all the best on the latest version

Thanks for this note! Maybe sticky it though so it pops on top of all the other comments so it'll be easier to find?