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Kaitlin

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    Apr 10, 2011
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    Apr 10, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Oh, Glory

    I'm so sorry. Hope things work out. This is the breaking of strongholds, the release of bondage to the heavy-laden. This is simple & therefore gorgeous. All the props in ...

    Apr 7, 2011
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    Apr 6, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Hide yo kids, hide yo wife (mustard NaPo)

    I feel like a secret agent, trying to shoot you up the list. Your poetry is fantastic, and I can't understand how you can possibly have so much to say. ...

    Apr 6, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Generation Y

    You'll be fantastic, I'm sure. Reading this, it tends to seem like you're rambling & going on and on a bit, but I read it again imagining someone reading it ...

    Apr 5, 2011
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  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Scramblings and Ramblings

    When the flesh of a beast spills God on your hands, you have to wonder how holy this can really be if gore hangs on the inside of your lips ...

    Apr 5, 2011
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    Mar 23, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Fall

    Get excited. 1. Take it out of italics. Please? I feel like if you do that it immediately makes it twice as good, but that might only be because I ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death

    Love-love-love-love. Lame review, I know. But that's really all I can say. Love-love-love-love-love-love. This is great.

    Mar 13, 2011
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    Mar 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The lost line the Road

    Is this about someone with a mental handicap? I suppose that is my initial interpretation. Mostly based off this line: “Mothafucka ge' out dis street, this our hood G” and ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Alphabet Altercations

    No more do we harbor dreams of grandeur; now we sit on the porch swing in gray noon light, watching the neighbor kids ride their bikes across the cracked asphalt. ...

    Mar 9, 2011


Life is the art of drawing sufficient conclusions from insufficient premises.
— Samuel Butler