Kalder

I have read dark poem before and I can honestly say this is one the best I have ever read. The second and third stanza is amazing because it raises ...

This poem actually put a tear in my eye. So many details yet so many questions arouse within me. For starters what caused her to consider committing suicide it arouses ...

I think this was a great start to what I hope will be a full novel. I had some questions as to why parents would let their son go biking ...

I realize the this is a prologue but I still have so many questions about this old man. That's not me criticizing I think it's important to leave the reader ...

I liked the details you put into describing his physical state. The girl he killed who is she? How did he kill her? It leaves me with a lot of ...

I liked the villain you made out of the man with the twisted face it reminds me a bit of Sylar from Heroes. The way he talked and acted seemed ...

I really enjoyed reading the description of the girl. It reminds me of the writing style of The house on Mango Street. I would have liked to hear more about ...