Kaliber

very nice, reminds me of the halo books alot. i liked it even though it was a little short.

Hm, i love it. it makes me want to keep reading, so, keep writing! love the story, exelent story line, couldn't find any mistakes that i know of. good work.

very nice peice of art here, can't wait for other peices from you, keep writing, i only say some grammar issues, but i expect you see them too. :D good ...

haha, awesome story you got going, i really like it. keep writing and they only real thing i can say is, confusing. we know nothing of this dude your talking ...

Very nice, i thought that the font was a little hard to read, and that you just dived right into the action withought explaining who was acually doing anything. couldn't ...