Kanaya

I love the language you've used in this piece, it makes it feel very dynamic and interesting. I felt quite on edge reading it, as if I was the subject ...

Although the intention is that there isn't much of a climax to end the piece, I feel like it needed one. I'm unsure as to what point/ideas you're trying to ...

I love this, because the rhymes and the rhythm appear upbeat to me. It conflicts like crazy with the actual content of the poem. It's dark, it's depressing, it's real, ...