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Re: Colors
Hello, EKK15. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. CLARITY & MESSAGE I have read the poem three times and I simply can ...
Mar 28, 2018 -
Re: Hopefully Sky
Hello, trulyness. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. PLOT The plot of the story, or I guess the moral, is that the ...
Mar 28, 2018 -
Re: Call me a planet
Hello, Katnes. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. PLOT Basically the whole plot was that the pluto was declared as not a ...
Mar 28, 2018 -
Re: let's play pretend for a while
Hello, manilla. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. CLARITY & MESSAGE Okay, I had to re-read this a few times to figure ...
Mar 28, 2018 -
Re: A Merry Band of Monsters - Chapter 3
Hello, Thundahguy. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. PLOT SO FAR I enjoyed this chapter because Grace and Aria are becoming fast ...
Mar 28, 2018 -
Re: A Merry Band of Monsters - Chapter 2
Hello, Thundahguy. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. PLOT SO FAR Okay, so far. Aria is a child who is working at ...
Mar 28, 2018 -
Re: Screaming Shadow Chapter 2
Hello, maishaywca. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. PLOT SO FAR Okay, even though this whole chapter is mainly dialogue, I still ...
Mar 28, 2018 -
Re: Destroyed
Hello, riles. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. Clarity & Message I can understand the message clearly. Heartbreak can shatter one’s life, ...
Mar 27, 2018 -
Re: Lyrical Chapter 4: "Kids Again"- Artist Vs Poet
Hello, LJF. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? ( I saw that you tagged me in this, so that is also why I ...
Mar 27, 2018 -
Re: Nameless Book Short Prolouge
Hello, AsterChai. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I.Plot so far… Since this is the prologue, I am sensing that the character of ...
Mar 27, 2018 -
Re: Knives With Lies
Hello, @Flumadiddle. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. Clarity and Message From what I read, the speaker dislikes their father. I am ...
Mar 26, 2018 -
Re: Screaming Shadow Chapter 1
Hello, maishaywca. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? I. Characters You seem to have a lot of characters at your disposal. They’re all ...
Mar 26, 2018 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 56
Hello, Ventomology. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? Note: I am letting you know that I did not read the previous chapters ( ...
Mar 26, 2018 -
Re: Life or Death?
Hello, emolemon. I am here to provide you a review. Let’s get started, shall we? ( I kept seeing this in the Green Room so I decided to just review ...
Mar 26, 2018 -
Re: romance is not my forte
Hello, killeham. I am here to provide you a review as promised. Let’s get started, shall we? I. Clarity and Message When I read this poem, I am assuming that ...
Mar 26, 2018