Karma

Pretty good concept. A little creepy, though, in my opinion. my thoughts exactly I mean, it's a good picture and all... but it scares me

sorry, but no go ( and I really am sorry!)

This, as I re-read it, seems incredibly sad. It brought tears to my eyes.

The mom drawing was awesome, and my only problem was the neck, sorry, but it looked like a bodybuilders' neck

I like it a lot, but I think it could be clearer; is Gregory the rapist? Is April the victim? Are they completely unrelatd? And why does April, listening about ...

okey dokey, then, when someone else post's, I'll post, I'm not trying to e mean or anything, but it is flopping, and now we'll be sure to continue it

This didn't really reach out to me, I don't know why. It seemed a little detatched, like there needed to be more description, like in the sentence: "You had so ...

I like this, and I'd like to say it was predictable, but it wasn't. Anyway, great work. I agree totally, and I love your use of larger word, like "pedantic"

((Uhhhm sorry, Dnamo, but I think this storybook is flopping because noone else will post...))

danx! I'll try and post some stationary i've been working on for my aunt, too...

((OOC: Now is a time fo rmore people to start posting! (hemhem)))

"Wake up, Kai!" a voice said from behind him. He blinked, "So, Eruas-" "It's 'Ru or Eru, only mom mother calls me by my full name" she said, annoyed. "Okay, ...

Wow-this floored me. Great, great job. Awesomeness! :D yup i kinda skipped part of it because its a solid block of text, tho spacings would be good

that was very good

danx, i have to use a mouse, tho, because mys canner's not hooked up, and these are my first tries at computer art