Kate.Grace

Helloo, Gracie here! Review time! Yay! (My favourite time of the day) The soft covers of your duvet press against you, enclosing you in a cacoon of warmth. Without meaning ...

Hahahahhahaa - Absoloutely hilarious. Thanks for that, you really have made my day!

Hi - I posted the first draft of this introduction to my first novel, I have taken the criticisms into consideration. One was that I should encorperate an accent into ...

Okay: I actually really like this - but there are a few things that you could do to improve it. When reading this I understand that this is a very ...

Hi, Review time!! Okay - to be honest with you: its not bad, but its really not great. A story beginning should grip you, not bore you. raven stared helplessly ...

Helloooooo Kate here! Its nitpicky time! Yay! My head still swam from the car accident that happened only moments ago. I like this line - its punchy. The accident didn't ...

Wow - I like the rhythm you have going, but I dont really understand the lyrics? Is it a parent/friend/sibling trying to help someone get over a breakup?

Its not my bio - its kind of a bio of the character. She narrates the story the whole way through and is sort of.. introducing herself at the beginning.

How can I make this more appealing? I want a reader to be hooked and it seems a bit boring? Any ideas from you brilliant people??

To be honest, I didnt really understand most of what you were talking about. Its very confusing when it probably doesent need to be. Why not say something like: "One ...

What makes you ‘you’ d’you think? The people around you, I guess; those amazing people who step in and out of your life. Those people who put you up and ...

I guess it all started when my mum left. I mean hell! I don’t blame her. I would leave. If I could, I’d leave too. Dad told us that she ...

Wow, thats really moving. I hope your friend's alright.

This is really good. Only thing is it moves a bit fast. It good quality writing, but I think you should fatten it out a bit. The bits of description ...

It sounds like a good idea for a story. What I do when I get writers block is get a pen and paper and map out the story - have ...