Kate.Grace

Helloo, Gracie here! Review time! Yay! (My favourite time of the day) The soft covers of your duvet press against you, enclosing you in a cacoon of warmth. Without meaning ...

Okay: I actually really like this - but there are a few things that you could do to improve it. When reading this I understand that this is a very ...

Hi, Review time!! Okay - to be honest with you: its not bad, but its really not great. A story beginning should grip you, not bore you. raven stared helplessly ...

Helloooooo Kate here! Its nitpicky time! Yay! My head still swam from the car accident that happened only moments ago. I like this line - its punchy. The accident didn't ...

To be honest, I didnt really understand most of what you were talking about. Its very confusing when it probably doesent need to be. Why not say something like: "One ...

This is really good. Only thing is it moves a bit fast. It good quality writing, but I think you should fatten it out a bit. The bits of description ...