Katriona

I could tell that it was a boy. That's really all I was going to say, but since I'm on here anyway, I think I'll say a little more. You ...

Hi! I am not very good at editing but I'll do my best. The door was shutting and closing, Did you mean to say, opening and closing? Often in the ...

Great story! I don't know how historically accurate it is, because I'm not an expert, but the story is very well written. I'm not very good at writing helpful criticism, ...

First, let me say I liked it, it was really good. Although, the way you made Abram "just laugh," causes me to think of Abram as a rebellious child, and ...