Kaylyn

Ai, shame on you. lol. *gives light slaps* Just Kidding. Just wanted to take up the "beating the crap out of you" offer. lol

Welcome to YWS! I know that when I started here my writing started improving. If you have any questions feel free to PM me, I'll answer them. Cool, you're 16, ...

OMG A MATH TUTOR!!!!!! Do you seriously help? I could use it next semester. Algebra 2 is horrible okay, you know I'm in 11th you caught me. 8th graders, you ...

Awww, whose the little baby? Thanks by the way.

I know, its the perfect number. 2010. Even. I like it.

Love- A simple four letter word, Always said, but is it ever meant or heard? It's always thrown around as a simple term Some people will never learn. I want ...

lol, yes I know teddybear22. It happens all the time. Thanks everyone for the reviews. It helps! See you monday teddybear22. Can I use your name?

Ai, I love school, its just somedays and some teachers are so horrible. lol. part of life I guess.

AHHHH, Someone help me. Ya'll say I am in need in grammar. Show me how to do it!!! Poetry isn't something I study. I need help so when you say ...

Oh gosh. This was one of my first poems. Its just so horrible when I compare it to the poems I write now. :( I'm getting better thanks to everyone ...

~ Chapter Six ~ When Fallyn came to her senses, she thought her eyes were still closed. She blinked and realized that she was awake. There was no light, not ...

Loss of Imagination Grey is all I see, A lack of imagination Four walls that block me in, To make a transformation. From ignorant to intelligent, Or is it the ...

Later that night I awoke in panic from a nightmare. As I tried to remember the dream, it became more distant than before so I gave up. Downstairs, I once ...

Okay. You had a few grammar mistakes that I noticed. Its calm not clam You also need to seperate your characters dialogue from your description. Its a rule of literature. ...

Okay. You had some punctuation and grammar mistakes. I suggest you fix them. Especially the uncapitilized I. People will eat you alive for doing that! My favorite part of the ...