Kaywiia

I love this, it is so cool!

I love this a lot. Keep on writing!

I fixed the poem, what do you think now?

This is intense, cute and gripping all at the same time. Kudos to you!

I love it is very discriptive but not annoyingly so. Good job!

Hola! I am here to review! Yay! Okay, First of all, I love it, beyond what you could possibly think! But....did you mean to say vry, or did you mean ...

This was nice, simple and beautifuly done all at the same time Brava to you! Ciao, Kally

Okay, the repetition is just my style but thank you for the advice. Yeah, I miss summer too. I wish I could speed up time just a little, or a ...

I love the cats mellow personality, it really adds to the story! I think overall this is a good story and deserving of praise. PM me when you write the ...

Please PM me if you continue this story, it is fascinating. You could do well with this piece. Honestly if I were you I would consider publishing this. Just a ...

This was very good, in the next chapter have the girl remember everything. That would be so interesting. Honestly your work was gripping, and I loved it. PM me when ...

Do turn this into a novel, and try to publish it. However, make your post shorter. Near the end, i though to myself, is this almost over. Otherwise it was ...

Thank you for the critique. By the way, the earned names are from the site, until later... Then i just go crazy with the names. And in a few chapters ...

This was actually really good. It was a tad slow but otherwise it was a good read. Will there be future installments? I hope so.

Wow, that was amazing. It was gripping, enthralling and mind-bending. I hope you wirite more of this story. When you do, PM me the link!