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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Fairytale

    Kazey here for a review! I loved Spilled so much I decided i absolutely had to check out your other work on Review Day. Needless to say, I love this. ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Warm Milk

    Kazey here for a review! I found this poem quite haunting. You gave vivid yet simple descriptions of the most mundane of things, and I think that's what created this ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What I Desire

    Kazey here for a review! So the message you were sending in this poem was really strong. It was clear to your average reader, and I think for a worldwide ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: christmas lights

    Kazey here for a review (Gotta get back in the lead!) So, I really liked the way that this poem is minimalistic, without capitalization or punctuation. I think it symbolised ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Road Trip

    Your friendly neighbourhood Kazey here for a review! So, there really isn't much TO review to be fair, but it was really nice. I loved the repetition you used, as ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: 2 Your Demographic

    Kazey here for a review! You put a really strong message across here, and I love that. You don't try to sugarcoat it behind flowery descriptions and nonsensical metaphor, and ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: construction workers hate their jobs though building blocks are great toys for your child

    Kazey here for a review! This was an... interesting poem. I can't quite tell if I like it or not, although I think I do. The poem has a great ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Republic of Thieves

    Kazey here for a review! This is a really nice piece, and looking at other comments I can see it's a memoir. Wow. You've been through some stuff. Anyway, I ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: Life as I Live it [PART 1/2]

    Kazey here for a review! Your description in this piece really fits it well. Being an autobiography, you don't use flowery language and adjectives, just real, true to life stuff, ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: What we could have been

    Kazey here for a review! So, this was a very good start to a poem, especially for a genre you're not particularly familiar with. It's good to go out of ...

    Jul 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Bad Texter

    Kazey here for my thoughts! The feels... They're too much. It was both really heart-breaking and yet heart-warming at the same time. I loved that even though the guy didn't ...

    Jul 30, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: murky depths, memories

    Kazey here, again for my thoughts more than a review. So, I guess the idea is that two friends grew up together, but something awful happened and they grew apart? ...

    Jul 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Money : A Mystery

    Kazey here for a review! This was a really good poem, with a strong start and such potential. It's moral was very well-worded and you have such a rich vocabulary! ...

    Jul 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Spilled

    Kazey here, for my thoughts more than a review, but whatever. I loved how abstract this poem was, how you used strong imagery to, instead of paint a crisp, clear ...

    Jul 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Nature, Spiritual Re: Solanum toberosum

    Kazey here for a review! Firstly, I love the title of your poem, how you've taken something as simple as a potato and made it seem so complex. Your imagery ...

    Jul 28, 2016


You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man.
— Dallas Winston, The Outsiders