KilljoyRetardedFish

Thanks for the review! And yes, bird should have been birds oops :P He probably might! I also tend to enjoy scenes secondary characters (sometimes even more than primary characters) ...

Thank you so much. I wrote this quickly and hadn't seen how redundant the sentences in my first paragraph sound. In all honesty I'm kind of cringing at how bad ...

Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it (despite the dying baby). Oh I hadn't noticed actually that I was using stream of consciousness! In ...

Haha thanks! I'm glad to hear that! Let me see if I can clarify. Well, the 18 was due to the fact that there is a swearing in the piece ...

Thank you for the constructive criticism! I really appreciate it! Though, to be honest this story was inspired by a lucid dream I had and it felt really amazing. When ...

Wow, thanks for all that! I do have problems with my tenses sometimes, I'm getting better at being consistent though! :) Argh, as for the 'to the contrary' part being ...

Aww thanks :) Okay, I'll keep it in mind: more descriptions! MORE! Haha, thanks for the criticism.

I got a feeling about the homeschooling part being off, but I guess that means more research for me then huh? Thanks for reviewing, any criticism is appreciated :)

Great capture of emotion! There is a lot said with few words, which is what hardly anyone can ever claim to do. Very well done, I see no constructive criticism ...

Wonderful, sadly this review won't really help, but I feel the emotion written in this. Sometimes these types of poems are crappy, but I related to it very well. Keep ...

This is very cute, I enjoyed this a lot. Even though my first post here is a poem, I'm not really a fan of poetry, but I just couldn't resist ...