Killyouwithwords

Wow, touching and honest, this was a true monument to the loss of our humanity. Short but concise. The only this that didn't seem right was when you wrote: “Waste ...

Very sweet poem, especially since it's a true story. I don't know what it's like to almost lose someone you love to disease, but I heard the sincerity and honesty ...

Sweet poem of old wounds and lasting love! Brilliant! However I felt as if you kind of just airbrushed through it without doing much editing. Also, that you mentioned her ...

Very good. Full of emotion and honesty. It was a good size, neither too long or too short, and the format was great. There were some lines that needed editing ...

Good job, interestinf font and format. But I felt like you kept repeating the concept that the cup was half full, yeah we get. Maybe just keeping it in the ...

Oh my gosh, this was fantastic! What can I say about it other than that it is amazing? Not much, but instead of using the term "atmospheric pulse" in the ...

Very good job I loved it! It was smooth, and not too short or too long :) But to be honest with you, I almost read it twice before I ...

Brilliant! I liked the wording you used and the flow of the poem was great. I could picture the sadness of this character, and the rather old fashioned of this ...

This poem was full of energy and a lot of pent up anger, I liked the emotion you put into it! It feels like this is almost a historical piece, ...

This is actually REALLY good. Probably one of the best poems I've read on this sight so far (and that hasn' t been many). It was romantic, but not overly ...

O my gooshness, this is exactly how I feel sometimes. Like you're trapped in a never ending circle of eating and sleeping that gets so lethargic it's painful.You did a ...

Hi! I'm Killyouwithwords here to review your poem! First of all I want to say that this was skillfully written. It was dark without being too depressing, and the first ...

I HOPE YOU WIN :) This poem is awesome and I'm happy I get to be the first one to review it, though I don't know much about villanelles. I ...

I liked this poem in general, it flowed and was very meaningful and so true :) ...but I couldn't get myself to enjoy it because of the punctuation. I get ...

I loved this!! The first line was surprising, but after I read further on it made sense to me. Beautiful and sweet. I liked how you tied in a dash ...