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KingofTheDamned

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shadows of Depression

    Actually, I wrote it as some creature creeping up and dragging me into a deep state of depression. If I wrote "upon me" then it would take away from the ...

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shadows of Depression

    Translating won't be a problem at all, it's just that the translation may screw up parts of it that had a deeper tone. But upon your request, I will certainly ...

    Nov 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dark Love

    Thank you, everyone, so very much for your thoughts and considerations on this piece. I do understand that now, with the twisted and almost sickening view of modern vampires due ...

    Oct 24, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dark Love

    A night of dark desire, A song of subtlety, Wolves vent their loneliness, The beautiful one arises. Mist shrouds her pale form, A most everlasting desire. Her ebony hair cascades ...

    Sep 29, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Lost at Sea [repost]

    What an elegant piece! As if i was there tossing and turning amongst the waves!

    Jul 23, 2011
  • General Articles Re: A horrible, horrible smile

    Quite vivid. few grammatical errors but not too much. Good piece.

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shadows of Depression

    Thanks for you compliment! Yeah, I actually wrote this one day when I was deeply depressed and I'm constantly battling it as of a power struggle crisis over my life. ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shadows of Depression

    The Shadows of Depression This shadow creeping upon me I want to rid of it Wanting to tear my soul apart Like a black cloud above It's getting closer It ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: In The Shadows

    Out of sight lurks a monster so horrid. Everyday it gets harder to rid. There's nowhere to hide from it, so here I remain; here I sit. I let it ...

    Jan 17, 2011


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind