Kingofnate

Great work! interesting concept, with the whole parallel worlds and all. But the thing with the clouds was a little confusing... why do they have clouds attached to them? At ...

Excellent! I can honestly say that writing a humorous poem about pants has never crossed my mind. So points for originality and humor. Criticisms: "Not one, or two, or three ...

I agree with wisegirl, in that Hannah is a horrible character. But don't hear me wrong, I think she is a great addition to the story. Jannessa, on the other ...