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KittieCat88

  • Art & Photography Re: Drawings

    These are well done let me now when you update ur pictures. :wink:

    May 9, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: what a long strange trip it's been

    The story is very creative but sometimes its hard to follow try a few more paragraph breaks and it might work sometimes people wont read if they cant read it. ...

    May 8, 2007
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Queen of Dolls

    Very well written, a little scary i must admit but wow it really got my attention.

    May 8, 2007


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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