Kiwisatsuma

Hey :) Welcome! YWS is a great place. I joined quite recently and so far I've found it really friendly and pretty awesome. :D Twilight! All my friends are always ...

Hey :) Welcome to YWS! I like this a lot. As a novel beginning it's interesting and well written and definitely makes me want to read more. Running as hard ...

Hey :) It's true that this a story about love but I think it belongs more in the general stories section, because the romantic section is really just for stories ...

Hey there :) As a high school romance I think this is an interesting story. I like that you have a couple of romantic interests instead of just setting one ...

Hey there :) So, this seems like an interesting plot and it was well written. I really wasn't expecting that twist with her going forward in time into her future. ...

Hey :) A funeral is quite an overused topic for a short story, but you made it different and genuinely touching. I liked the way you focused on the personal ...

Gah... *shakes head in amazement* Such an intriguing concept. I am proud to have played a part in inspiring the creation of this work. So many layers of meaning to ...

Name: Talinea Gender (if you're male, you're a sorcerer, female, you're a sorceress): Female Age (in the hundreds, though they resemble youths): 217 (quite young compared to others. Looks about ...

L: 6 R: 2 Apparently I'm a left brained person. It's funny, 'cause I wouldn't have thought that about myself. I didn't agree with many from either side though. XD

Hey :) I don't usually review poetry because I can never think of anything worth saying, but I'm going to give it a go. :D Anyway, I liked this. You ...

Hi! Me again. XD Right. So, you'll be pleased to hear, I'm not gonna go on about showing not telling in this review! :D It felt much less rushed and ...

Hey there :) Welcome to YWS! :D So, this is interesting and you have a good plot but you could definitely make some improvements to it. First off, you need ...

Hmm, I'll be twenty six... I have absolutely no idea, to be honest. XD I still haven't decided what I want to do at university, even though I've only got ...

The racism in Germany during WW2 was very different to racism in America. I don't know if you're talking about nowadays or years back, but in America racism and segregation ...

Okay, well, I had a religious upbringing (my mum's a vicar) but I don't believe in God, so.. yeah, that's my perpective on it. 1. What's the main concept of ...