Kix39

I really liked this poem! It was short, NO WAY perfect legnth! It was really touching and sweet! GJ

This is kind of a long poem, which i felt like I was forceing my self to read. It was nice, just a little too long to tell one topic. ...

I like this poem alot, It was touching. It flowed, and it was smooth.

I liked this peice, only it was a little too into me, I don't want to say lighten up, but them again I do!

I liked it allot. It was really touching, but maybe just go farther than just rhyming, like look up more complicated words and rhyme them. At some times I felt ...

I like it. I don't know what to say though, I kept on thinking that it ment more than what it really said... hmmm Kix39

Thanks! This is only my 2ed poem and I love the Comments!

Thanks! This is my 2ed piece and I love doing this! Please keep the comments coming!

I didn't like it because of 2 things. The whole time I felt like it was screaming out at me, and the second thing is that it had too many ...

It was well thoght out, but a little Spacey over all. Maybe better word choice might have made it jump out more.