KnightTeen

Hey, once again thanks for the review! The formatting on this is a little weird, but really no one on her can control the formatting, and no one has ever ...

Hey, HT here to review. I agree largely with what kayfornight is saying, this is in fact a very good work, and your vocabulary is clearly extensive. The plot/topic (whichever ...

Black, wow. Just wow. And don't curse or kill the formatting, it works really well here. (Although, truth be told, there are times when I want to enlist you in ...

Hey, HT here to review. First of all, I liked how you began each stanza with the title. Doing so just further emphasized the meaning and got that point across ...

Hey, HT here to review. I read your first one a while back, and enjoyed it, and I enjoyed this one as well. I believe that what Life said unto ...

Wow, this was good. And I know that I say that a lot, but I never say it unless I mean it. Grammar, correct, no mistakes, CHECK. Spelling, correct, no ...

Hey HT here to review. I liked this. You used words and rhythm very well, and overall it looks good. Just a few things that I would like to point ...

I liked this, and I think that every author here will be able to understand what you are saying, because at some point we've all been there. I didn't, don't, ...

First of all, let me say that I did like this and that I hope that you continue it. That being said, I must say that this seems a little, ...

Hey, HT here to review. I liked the structure of the poem. At times you answered the 'Whys' and at other times you didn't, which on the first read through ...

Wow. I almost don't want to review this at the thought of not being able to do it justice. It seems incredibly personal, and I really don't want to say ...

This is good, really, and I hate repeating myself so many times but you really must watch it. The scene with the potions teacher was wonderfully written, but it was ...

This was a great continuation of the last chapter. But, I have to agree with @MarieRowlands, and I have said it before, this is leaning dangerously close to Harry Potter. ...

Hey, Ht here for a review. Let me just day first of all that I loved this literary work, and also that it is technically perfect. The spacing of the ...

This is so beautifully tragic, and sadly true. Nothing about this feels like it shouldn't be there, and I can just imagine you sitting down and having the words flow ...