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KnightTeen

The Knight of Teens

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Good-Bye

    Let me just say first that this was totally beautiful and brought tears to my eyes. But, and I always hate having to point these out, there were some grammar ...

    May 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Fire

    Okay, I love the rhythm of this poem, and the rhyming structure used. It has very good flow to it, and the rhymes blend very well with each other. However, ...

    May 21, 2013


/I think, today,/ he thought back, /the important fact is that I don't/ need /to be better than him. He can just be a person. And I... I can just be one too./
— Adolin (Wind and Truth by Brandon Sanderson)