Koi

Excellent ending, and I disagree with your opinion of Ethan. I found him to be in character for that type of situation and age [I should know a bit since ...

I would love to edit anyone's stories of any genre for any of you, just PM me or post here. I would love to chat with you too, I don't ...

Okay, I'm not sure why you wanted me to review since I see you've gotten two very good ones :D But anywho, all-in-all I found this a very refreshing and ...

Excellent beginning but after the first few paragraphs I was starting to wonder when you were going to stop using the main characters name. Sorry if I'm sounding rude, but ...

Good story, but it started a bit slow. Also there were quite a few things I caught but reading the above persons reply I'm not going to repeat them. But ...

Thank you for the welcome everyone =] [saying it here so I don't repeat myself xD] Whoo hoo! A Stargate fan! Stargate fans, UNITE!!! *paragraph taken out* Hey, I like ...

Hi, uh, I'm Koi... and I forgot what I was going to say :oops: :idea: Oh yeah! I've never been to a site quite like this. [i have an account ...