Konijnje

Thanks for the review, it is much appreciated :)

No worries. I had difficulty with this piece partly due to the fact that it was an actual experience, but that's why I submitted it for reviews. I appreciate your ...

This is actually coming from my perspective. My family recently took in a baby (a crack baby, to be specific) and she's had some struggles since being home. This incident ...

Thank you for your kind thoughts and criticism! I'll keep these things in mind when I revise!

Thank you so much! This is incredibly useful for when I make revisions! :)

Haha it's a looooong story. But I'm so glad to see you're still around as well!

Yeah! I disappeared for a while bc of family issues but I'm still here!

Not here to review, but I just wanted to say that this is such a beautiful and brilliant metaphor and I love it! :)

Thank you for your kind words! I appreciate it!

Thank you! The word "Mother" was definitely emphasized for a more sarcastic tone, and I did try to put as much emotion as possible into the piece.

Aww thank you so much! I really appreciate the kind thoughts!

Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate your input!

Thank you so much for the review! This certainly is a different style from my usual writing, so your input is greatly appreciated. I will take your advice into consideration ...