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KuroT

KuroT

  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: This Old Porch Swing

    I like this, but that's probably because i relate to this, but I think that's what's good. This poem could be relatable to a lot of different and diverse people. ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Timegirl: Chapter One

    This is very interesting;I like this! But, as this is a review, here I go. In the second Alex's POV, 'I pause the video because me and laughing so hard ...

    Apr 2, 2016
  • Lyrics » Other, General Re: Darkness’ Silhouette

    This is great! Bravo to her, because I could see this progressing into something bigger than black and white on a computer screen. Though I do think this is great, ...

    Apr 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Shattered

    Hi there! I must say, this is great. It really drew me in, and that beginning is great, however, it did confuse me. Perhaps a comma after 'away' in the ...

    Apr 2, 2016


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings