Kuyerjudd

This was nicely put together. Surreal, vivid imagery. I really felt this. I enjoy organic poems like this. I swear, when I read this, my mind must've tricked my olfactory ...

I love spoken word poetry. I thought this was well-written. The imagery was captivating and the assonant quality of it kept me reading. That second stanza, in particular, was powerful; ...

I'm pretty sure you had meant this to be in verse format and not in a sort of prose poem form, given that there are odd spaces in between punctuation ...

This is a very gripping read. I don't come across many poems that are this graphic (in a good way). Often, when poets go for this, it tends to lead ...

Interesting read. I've come across poems that pulled off the same thing, punctuation-wise (but none that currently come to mind). Yes, the reader may feel breathless reading through it, but ...