Kwantack

Wow, I've never seen so many parenthesis in one poem. But it's interesting and different, so you sould keep those. Here's what I noticed... I’m not short. (I’m not tall.) ...

I. Loved. This. I just noticed a few things you may consider: Laughter bounces off the walls as many merry people meet to do what we all love. Try capatalizing ...

Thank you all for comments! I've had many requests to make a second one, so...we'll see what happens.

This is really well written! I loved reading it! Very enjoyable. I don't have anything to add or comment on, really, and I don't think you should change anything! It ...

Great imagery with this! I loved it! Maybe try captalizing each line I gave you my trust and like shattered glass you broke it. Great simile here!! I whispered you ...

Great imagery with this! I loved it! Maybe try captalizing each line I gave you my trust and like shattered glass you broke it. Great simile here!! I whispered you ...

This is really great! I found it really enjoyable. Here's what I noticed: I always smiled, when they didn't want to see- The comma isn't needed here. My tears, and ...

This hath excellent imagery! I enjoyed reading it. Just a few things that I noticed: The past is a dark palce to be Like a stormy night that you wish ...

My favorites were the dog and the panda (bamboozle!) They're all really cute. Everything could use some more detail, though, but I really liked them. The dog one is drawn ...

Hahahah when I was scrolling down, I was freaking out because it looked like she was walking towards me, getting closer and closer and AAAH!!! But this is really cool! ...

I'm not much of an artist, but I just LOVE the expression on your face!!! It's like, "Hey! What's up? I'm having a GREAT day!" You're a great artist. Good ...

Whoa, this is really cool. And sometimes the best stuff we don't understand where they came from ourselves, so yeah. I have kissed the lips of death Good opening line ...

This had such a warm and fuzzy feeling to it I could just melt! I loved all the imagery and the words you used were great! I can't say anything ...

Whoa, okay, this is really sad, but I loved it. Snow is falling The wind is calling Frost hugs the leaves A blanket for the trees Good beginning, very descriptive, ...

You had good imagery here and you described stuff well. Here's a few things I noticed: Grass is prickling at my feet, Epic first line my thoughts are restless in ...