Kyuubi

Hola and Bonjour! Welcome to YWS. It's been said before but I wanted to say it too. This site will definatley get you back into writing. I used to have ...

Hola and welcome to our jolly clan here. The review before you post thingamy is a nice thing, isn't it? Anywho, I just wanted to be part of the greeters ...

Bonjour! Welcome to YWS. I'm surprised I was the first to say it here in the post. Anyway, I think you will have fun here. There are games, the chat, ...

Hey and welcome. You will develop as a writer here. You'll make good friends too. So basically you'll be fine. If you do come up with any questions or concerns, ...

Hola and welcome. It seems like everyone has already said that to you but I wanted to join the group. I think you'll have fun here. Everyone does. Anyway, good ...

Bonjour! Yes I like to say hi (in different languages) to people I've never seen. You say you like Sci-Fi? Well me too. I really hope to read your writing. ...

I think it's all been said. But I want to say it too....Welcome to YWS! It's a fun site where you can do pretty much anything. So welcome new members ...

Hola. Welcome. We have a very jolly little clan here at YWS. 'Little' may not be the best word. Anywho, if you have any questions PM me and I'll be ...

Funny! My librarian got a kick out of it.

Really, really, really long. But good anyway! :D I loved it! In my top 10, this is a 4. I can't really make any reviews on it though because of ...

Nice job with this chapter. I really enjoyed reading this. I did have a hard time finding the paragraph breaks though. I also find the wing designations a little funny. ...

This revised version was way better than the last one. I liked it a lot better. The added detail made it seem more believable. I actually had a good time ...

I liked this story a lot. I happened to like the way the conversations between the characters flow so easily. It was so natural. The descriptions were also good. I ...

Same here. There just wasn't enought character description to make it believable. I also think that there wasn't enough action for the characters in between dialogue and in the dialogue ...

I thought this one was better. Is this story Sophia's? It had better detail but it is still lacking in detail. Try describing the vampires a little more. Their individual ...