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  • Other Poetry Re: The Beast Within

    I really like the way you did this. It's really shows a picture. "Late at night it comes clawing at the door, human no more." It could be just me, ...

    Oct 29, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Inspirational Courtyard

    Hmm... well, I'm new to the reviewing thing but I'll give it a shot. Nice job on the poem, I like the content. The rythm is a bit off for ...

    Oct 29, 2007


You know how hard it is to feel like an extreme falcon-headed combat machine when somebody calls you "chicken man"?
— Rick Riordan, The Red Pyramid