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i like your poem, more so the idea of it; it's really quite spectacular Too dense to carry.
 My clasp is still strong enough.
 I will always cling with fire, ...

wowzer this is really great for a fifteen year old ;) i wonder why you don't replace fish with maybe a hermit crab? i think that would probably be more ...

To be quite blunt i’de like to point out to lillymoore that poetry is not an art of correctness, i think by saying the sight of laughter your creating this ...

firstly i think silented1 should shut up, he sounds like an asshole, but i really like your poem i hope you don’t mind but i just printed it out and ...

firstly i love that you haven’t edited; coz makes enough sense to me ;) this is a beautiful piece of writing even for a sixteen year old let along a ...

Firstly I’d like to mention that i like the way you referenced god and starbucks in the same line, it’s quite brilliant. Am i right in thinking that connection between ...

i like it, im new and this is the first poem I’ve genuinely liked, what i like best is how the poem moves along without getting caught in all the ...