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Hey, I enjoyed reading this! The poem really flows and i liked the repetition of "on this lost highway". One tiny mistake though... I know where to go. w atching ...

Ok. Soooo sorry...i just realised that your sentence was fine after all! My apologies! ~LadyFingerZ~

Wow. I love this! Just wanted to point out something: The woman pressed the baby closer into her breast her eyes widened. Im not sure, but is it supposed to ...

Evening Primrose...

Hi, i think i might be a ble to help you with this since i did Israel and Palestine for my history class. But...i just checked the date and saw ...

Hey all, I'm new around here...well, i actually joined a while ago but only decided to pluck up the courage and introduce myself now! :) I enjoy writing poetry as ...