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LadyArtemis

Chandi Choeun-La

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Hybrids (chapter 3)

    Hi jls1638! LadyArtemis here to review. First thing first, I really love this chapter! The way that you portrayed Sarah is absolutely amazing. I like the way that you include ...

    Nov 4, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Highway Part 1

    Hi Storygirl. Nice to meet you. Anyways, I actually don't mind reading a long story like this. This story was very entertaining in my opinion. The way that you compared ...

    Oct 17, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Confessions of an Unconscious Murderer

    First off to say I love the title. It's different from others I've read. Titles like this is what grabs readers' attention. Love how you described Grant and Renalds. I ...

    Oct 17, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: The perfect night.

    First thing first. I liked the description of this chapter. Very interesting and eye catching. Although, I did see a few mistakes that you could fix up. There were errors ...

    Oct 15, 2013


Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
— Gretchen Wieners