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Re: The Girl, The Monster and The Night
A review but also a few words... Hun, first of all I think this is pretty good writing. I think there are a few bits (like the specificity of 12:30am) ...
Feb 19, 2018 -
Re: twelve/seventeenths
Hello Willard, First off, I am not 100% sure how to review this properly since, as pizzaroll said, I think it is chocked full of inside jokes I am not ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: robbery (dg's diary)
Hi there DemonGoddess, First of all, I really enjoyed reading this poem! Thank you for writing it, I know many people have faced this situation before as well and it ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: Why...
Hello Flumadiddle, I have definitely had days where all I write is poetry like this one. I am sorry your sister is so...so... well, to be honest, I am having ...
Dec 29, 2017 -
Re: Death Comes as the End
Hello Lady Okra, First of all, I greatly admire your writing. I find it quite beautiful. I would like so share with you some things I noticed, and some things ...
Dec 29, 2017 -
Re: carton grandmother
Hello there, Reading this I realized that there was actually a lot to this. I originally was confused, but then I looked at it again and I think I understand ...
Dec 28, 2017 -
Re: Not Damn Say
Hello PlantLady. I would like to start by saying I can truly relate to the feelings in this poem. To me, I view this poem as a breaking of metaphorical ...
Dec 27, 2017 -
Re: Bewitched love.
Hello Radiant Shadow! I, too, am a returning writer, but I couldn't remember my login so I had to make a new account. boo... but we are back now and ...
Dec 26, 2017 -
Re: Piano Acrostics
Hello! First of all, wow! Such great use of an acrostic format, I, myself, never thought to use the word more than once. I guess I thought it was just ...
Dec 26, 2017