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LadyMysterio

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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Williwaw Chapter 24

    Ze Lady of Mystery here to review! Another chapter another review! First Impressions Ooh boy we've got a trouble boiling in this chapter. Always fun! For us, certaily not for ...

    Jun 3, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Williwaw Chapter 23

    Ze Lady of Mystery here to review! Another chapter another review! First Impressions I liked this chapter quite a bit, I'm starting to get into the story more now and ...

    Jun 2, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Williwaw Chapter 22

    Ze Lady of Mystery here to review! I saw you put out more chapters, so im hoping I can work my way up to those this month! I'm hoping to ...

    Jun 1, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Williwaw Chapter 21

    Ze Lady of Mystery here to review! First Impressions I like how you start with this line "Atheron was intimidating" and then go one to tell us why it's intimidating. ...

    May 23, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Williwaw Chapter 20

    Ze Lady of Mystery here to review! It's been a moment so my apologies, I'm a bit rusty. I figured I'd start from here. Since your first 20 or so ...

    May 23, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Daughter of War- Chapter 4: The Daughter of Spring

    Ze Lady Off Mystery is back for another review! I'll start with some general story stuff. Sprinkle some Grammar in and whatnot. Again, I like the way you describe stuff. ...

    Dec 22, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Daughter of War- Chapter 3: Ares

    Ze Lady Of Mystery is here to review! I'm a sucker for Greek mythology so I was drawn to this so fast in the green room!! I'll start with some ...

    Dec 16, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chapter 5 Upgrades part 1 of 2

    Ze Lady of Mystery is here to review! I love this concept and your writing style! Almost reminds me of Clive Cussler's books. While I seem to be thrown into ...

    Dec 9, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 1

    Ze Lady of Mystery is here! For starts wow that was a great hook! Had me immediately wanting to know the history between these characters. And the action, and scene ...

    Dec 9, 2023
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Robin Hood & The Silver Pistol

    HI here is my promised review Myth 🙂 I’ve already read the first bit of this, and corrected and review accordingly. So i’ll skip that first bit for now. First ...

    Nov 1, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Finders, keepers; losers, weepers.

    Hi, Lady Here with a review! Wow right off the bat I love this so much. It really feels full of emotion and reading it, well I don't want to ...

    May 20, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: The Civil War - Prologue: The Beginning of the End

    Hello! Lady here with a review! I must say I love your writing style. Everything looks very clean and easy to read. As far as I can tell this chapter ...

    May 16, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 6]

    Hello, Lady Here to review this awesome chapter! wow, I don't know how anyone has not liked this or reviewed this yet it is so well written, wow. I very ...

    Feb 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, General Re: .

    Hi, Stellar! Lady here! quickly before we get into the review. when I read this it inspired me to start playing the Zelda game we have(twilight princess). Anyway onto the ...

    Jan 31, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: We Have To Stop Meeting Like This (When We Ruled The Waves Chapter 2)

    Hello! Lady here with a review! OOh pirates I love pirates!! and anything sea related but especially ships and pirates. Right enough of me ranting on. to the review! I ...

    Jan 31, 2021


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