LadySpark

hi Dream. I'm here to review this poem!!! :D Lips of rouge, a hellish crimson. Ebony lashes over senseless orbs.

Verse 1: Stand up tall, Stand up mighty, Maybe one day You'll be like them. Never got a worry. Never got a care. Never got to worry, cause other people ...

hi! I'm drama and Imma review you today. She walks inside of me . Between shredded muscle , and fractured bone , She waits for eyes to open , Outside ...

hi!Here to review!!! You see only the sky You T aste only the air, You F eel only freedom, Okay, I see You you you you over and over again. ...

hi! I'm here to review! Voices echo in the silence , Tell of a race long ago . Standing tall among the trees , I personally don't like poems without ...

hi! Here to review! “No, you will never change!” Said so many people to me. Betrayed by God And wished by the Demon This line has a truthful beauty to ...

Hi! Here to review!!! A tight smile and warm eyes, No one knows the secrets. As much as I like this line, it didn't really pull me in. How could ...

hi! I'm here to review!!! :) They caught him, the one black as pitch, and held him against his will. He shudders amidst the fences, despondent and degraded, hanging his ...

Thanks for the comments everyone.

Simply perfect epic windings.

Hello! I'm Drama, the Llama, Pointe etc. I like your name! Oh, and people are going to randomly going to follow you, it might be because you have no followers, ...

Hi! I'm going to try to review this before I go to church in 20 minutes, so lets see how far we get. I'm Drama, and thank you for asking ...

banned for being to active in this form. :)

I entered your poem in the 10,000 point contest, i was so impressed.

Hello! Here as requested. :) Hope I do a good job. :P Ivory keys, sing to me - sweet thoughts a melodious motion. beautiful opening. Just exquisiteness. Crescendo heights, a ...